These are Dramatic Melody's nominations and comments for the 2017 awards. See all nominations here.
It really hits all the right notes for me—two realistic and relatable characters with well-thought-out problems, a setting so alive that you can’t help but get immersed in it, and Firebrand’s prose that’s just such a delight to read.
Chromatic has some really amazing one-shots, but “Orange” stands out for being very energetic and so dedicated to the rebellious nature of its main character. [Imaginative]:[Clockwork] does an amazing job of working with the narrative he’s set out to tell and making us feel a whole range of emotions about it that I couldn’t help not nominating this story.
There’s a playful tone that really elevates the story, and how JFought writes dialogue does a lot in making a pretty mundane plot into a really interesting read.
It’s insane how Firebrand made the setting so alive in this story. “Mojo” blends the real-world and Pokemon world very well, making an already great one-shot even better.
I really like how immersed icomeanon6 makes the reader feel with how they set up the setting in this story. It does a lot in making the story more impactful.
PhalanxSigil works with what is probably the most familiar narrative of Pokemon and somehow adds layers to it that makes it more interesting and holistic. Granted, it’s not an uncommon interpretation of Red and Blue, but how the story tackles their dynamic is so, so well-done.
More than anything, the story just gets Team Skull’s unique character so well in this story. Yes, they’re ridiculous and downright funny, but The Teller balances that out with why they’re labeled a villainous team in the first place.
Gladion and his Pokemon really shine here, and seeing how one particular dynamic fixes itself as the story goes on was a real treat to read. Ambyssin does a great job in presenting everyone’s favorite edgy rival from Alola, reminding us that behind the cold facade is a trainer that really cares for his Pokemon.
These two together are just such a joy to read, and how Blackjack Gabbiani presents their exchanges is so natural that you feel like you’re right beside them in this scene.
How Zinnia snaps Greta out of her funk is probably the best conversation I’ve read this year. Zinnia is just so ripe with character here while Greta makes for a great catalyst to the story’s narrative, and Eskay64 used both of their characters very well.
How the story makes us feel sorry for Red does so in a very interesting way. The story actually ends on a not-as-heartbreaking note, but realizing just how Red has processed and eventually accepted the whole ordeal doesn’t fail to punch you in the gut.
It feels weird nominating this for Most Heartwarming seeing as the first half of the fic is pretty much a contender for Most Heartbreaking, but how Eskay64 turns it around with the introduction of Zinnia really leaves you in that bittersweet acceptance that Greta has. That last line only adds to the sweetness, too.
“Orange” does an amazing job in walking us through the thoughts of a captured Pokemon so against his capturing.
How Ambyssin explores Gladion’s character here makes for a great read, treating his dynamic with his Pokemon with a lot of care.
Furik was an enjoyable character in both of JFought’s one-shots last year, but IMO it was in “The Evening Thief” where we got to see why he’s such an enjoyable character. How he builds a dynamic with the characters around him and the environment he’s in is such a joy to read.
I nominated Tabitha for this award last year because even if he was an antagonist, Starlight Aurate did a great job in showing another side of him that made him more than a villain (which, in essence, is what makes Drowning a compelling read.) It’s the same reason why I’m nominating him now, since Chapter 15 takes that even further and gives us a character in the middle of a situation much larger than he could’ve ever imagined that you can’t help but sympathize with him.
JFought really gets her childishness down, and it makes for some really funny exchanges with Furik. Her character does really well in adding to the feel-good vibe of the entire story.
“Girl, honey, sugar pie, sweetie,” blares Totodile, her commanding voice barreling over Cyndaquil’s and completely drowning him out, “if you can beat the most powerful trainers around just by yourself, then Johto’s really as weak as that Kalosian trainer said it is. And I’m gonna do the same without breaking a sweat or evolving!”Chikorita extends two of his vines.“What’d you say?! You mocking me, Totodile?! Pokémon battle, right now! You and me!”“And risk bruising my beautiful face for my new trainer, baby? Never! Plus, wouldn’t it look bad for you if the trainers come in and you’re still hiding in the corner, licking the bruises I would hand you to?”Cyndaquil tries to step in to mediate.“Now now, let’s not fight…”“I think SOMEONE’S itching for a bruising, and it ain’t me!” bellows Chikorita.“Girl, you better check yourself before you wreck yourself!” counters Totodile, wagging a claw in front of Chikorita.
I mean, I didn't think I needed a Totodile saying "Girl, you better check yourself before you wreck yourself" in my life, but I clearly did.
It’s been a long time since I’ve battled like this. You say it’s been a couple of years since I’ve vanished. It feels like longer. But battling still feels good. My pokémon are certainly happy to be getting some fighting in.I notice a look in your eyes, though. It’s curious. You seem a little weary yourself. I find myself speaking for the first time in a very, very long time. My voice is rusty, though, and seems to have lowered slightly in pitch. About time puberty hit.We talk about your Professor, Elm, and how, although a little absent-minded at times, he really seemed to care about your progress, even going as far as to give you his number and call you from time to time. I express how I would’ve loved it if Professor Oak had done that.At mentioning his name, however, you grow silent. It’s hard to make out through the snow, but there’s a sense of sadness growing on your face.“Did you know that there’s a requirement for Trainers to be allowed to climb Mt. Silver?” you ask.I wasn’t aware at all.“Apparently, it’s a new thing. You have to beat all 16 Gyms on the Tohjo continent.” He pauses. “So that means, uh…well…I met your rival, Blue.”I’m a little confused.“He’s a Gym Leader now. Doesn’t really specialize in a type, but he has a rhydon, so it’s not as if he’s not following in the previous Viridian Leader’s footsteps.” He looks down at his feet. “I mentioned you to him. After I beat him. Said I was inspired to start my journey in the first place because of everything you did.” You chuckle. “He asked me, ‘Did ‘ya know I beat him to the punch?’ I didn’t, and he seemed sad when I told him so.” You look up at me. “Professor Oak didn’t talk about you at all, though, not even when I mentioned your name. Why is that?”I feel a sad smile creep onto my face. It’s funny, really. After all this time, and even after hearing someone actually praise me for the efforts of my journey, the same thought forms in my head that’s been there for so long. When you hear it, I can almost see your heart break a little. But I can’t help what I think. I know, in my heart, that it’s true.“I’m not worth it.”
It’s a special kind of heartbreak, what this last scene does to you. It’s actually the least bitter out of all the scenes in “Worth”, but how PhalanxSigil presents Red’s acceptance is so great.
Ponyta stared at his hand, and didn’t move a muscle. Other than his shaking fingers, he didn’t move a muscle either, not at first. But slowly he did move—no more than an inch at a time.Then he felt the heat. Ponyta’s mane was true fire, and he felt it. It hurt, and he pulled back the last inch he’d just taken. The heat didn’t reach there. ‘The Indians say that monsters control their fires better than we control ours. That makes me think they’ve never met that devil-dog of Cottonwood’s back east, but maybe they know something about the prairie monsters.’Hal swallowed, and moved his hand closer by that one inch again. The heat was still there, and it still hurt. He held his hand in place for ten seconds before he had to wince and mutter, “…ow!” But Ponyta kept staring and didn’t move—not forward but not away either. Hal didn’t know if he would be punished for showing weakness or…The heat subsided. It was still warm, but it was no longer unbearably hot around his fingers, even though nothing had moved. Before Hal was certain about what this meant, he moved in another inch and a sliver until it was hot again. There were few more seconds of pain, then as before the air cooled down until it was tolerable. So Hal moved in closer. He inched toward the mane in this way as slowly as the hands on a grandfather clock. Then at last there was a sharper pain as the tip of his index finger brushed against a strand of fire. But that pain and that heat faded as well. When it did, he stuck in his entire hand.He was not burned.It felt the way his hands did when they were under a blanket and close to a fireplace. The mane looked like all one fire, but now Hal thought he felt the single hairs. When he tried to close some between his fingers they escaped, but when he held still and open, they brushed against him in waves like tall prairie grass in the hot sun. He could put that exact sensation into words in his head even before he realized how wide his smile had grown.Ponyta moved closer and sniffed his coat. Hal was more than glad now that Rachel had made that burnberry-smell sink into their clothes yesterday. Her nose tickled him and he laughed a little. He patted her head and she let him.
Really, that excerpt can extend to the whole scene of Hal taming the Ponyta, because icomeanon6 does such a great job of presenting it. How they used Ponyta’s fire as a way to present Ponyta calming down was really nice, and it’s guaranteed to take a few “aww”s out of you by the end of the scene.
"I… lost someone. Really close to me. You might have heard about it on the news, it was… it was the girl who ran this building before.""Mmmmm… can't say I really keep up with the news." Zinnia shrugs again. "But still, sucks that someone died. It'd suck even more if someone else did, y'know?"
The delivery of that last line is just really great, and it's a big part of why I like this story.
“We're always looking for something else, a pokémon that will best complement the strengths and weaknesses of our existing team. And yet some of the best trainers in the world have made a career out of limiting themselves.”
I still can’t get over how great this quote from Karen is and how nicely it just captures the whole essence of the one-shot.