These are JX Valentine's nominations and comments for the 2014 awards. See all nominations here.
Can't help but second dp's nomination for this fic. It ended in 2014, and it was a wild ride from start to finish with fantastic characters, well-constructed plot, and a wicked mastery of cliffhangers. Requiem kept you wanting to read. It made you feel something for the characters, and hey, it offered up a nice thrill ride along the way.
Probably one of the more unique ideas to be tried on Serebii, A Leash of Foxes worked not just because of Cutlerine's efforts and imagination (of which there were plenty and plenty, respectively) but also because it was half-written via audience participation. What came out of this was an experience: half wonderfully plotty Weird Western and half the blood and tears of its readers. Mostly tears. Maybe.
While a themed one-shot series isn't a new concept, [Imaginative]:[Clockwork] strives to make each story he tells unique and enjoyable. His entry for this year, Green, does exactly that. It tells the story of a crook couple who try to live a straight life in quiet, 60's-esque suburban Viridian. Or, more accurately, it tells the story of Loretta, the wife of the couple, who does her best to live a quiet life but realizes quickly that you can take a girl out of a city, but there's only so much you can do to take the city out of the girl. And the ending? Absolutely perfect.
It's about the epic struggles between godlike Digimon, and it FEELS very epic in its execution. There's a sense of poetry in its attention to detail, a sense of urgency in its politics, and the gods mentioned are treated as GODS, not as Digimon—so, in other words, it's easier to take them seriously because, well, they're gods. All in all, it's surprisingly quite heavy for a Digimon fic.
It's a zombie apocalypse fic in which six dead people (they get better) play a game of who can kill the most undead. That alone is awesome, but the main character does it with a magic raincoat. Just … it's worth it. Believe me.
While some vignettes (like the first one eligible for this year) might require SOME knowledge of the Slayers cast, for the most part, these are standalone, highly enjoyable, quick-bite types of reads. One of them involves an erotic bakery. Seriously.
So take an almost-ordinary guy, his best friend/right-hand catfox, and the most disgruntled legendary shoved into a human form and send them on a journey to find Ho-oh and stop Giratina from going on a rampage, and you have Wandering Storm in a nutshell. It is basically just as much of a recipe for hilarity as you can probably imagine.
In all the years I've read Pokémon fanfiction, I've never read anything quite like A Leash of Foxes. Besides the fact that it's an interactive fanfiction (which happens but is rarely done in a way that ends with a coherent story), it's also a slightly steampunk Weird Western wherein Pokémon are reimagined as Tim Burton-esque horrors that can and will kill you or at least probably want you dead and the characters are characters indeed, if you know what I mean. If you're the kind of person who likes old school computer games AND Lovecraft, A Leash of Foxes is an enjoyable read.
The reason why I'm nominating this is going to be practically the same reason why you're going to see it pop up again in Expansion of Canon: it's not just unique. It's THOUGHT-OUT with how unique it is. Solvino tackles a subject that doesn't get addressed in fanfiction, and he does it with incredible attention to detail. Even the tiniest things like how the ticket office detects counterfeit money is addressed … and it's addressed with Pokémon. The point is that Solvino not only tackles a subject no one else has thought to touch, but he's thought of all these fascinating uses for Pokémon in order to do it. And it's told through a string of stories, not in a dry, textbook fashion. Bonus points?
One of the fun things about this fic is the combination of what it sets out to do with how it tries to do it. This is a story about grunts of the canon evil organizations looking to join up with their respective teams, yet it doesn't try to make each cause seem sympathetic, nor does it try to Draco-in-Leather-Pants the evil organizations (read: make them seem awesome and amazing). Each vignette carries with it a separate voice, some of which resonate rather strongly and capture the general essence of what their respective evil teams are about. In short, no frills. Just individual characters shaping individual stories.
Trainer fic with experimental twists? Aww yiss. No, but really, almost every scene is told in literally a different style, yet somehow, it works.
Slightly steampunk Weird West version of Orre inhabited by Pokémon as designed by Tim Burton. I'm pretty sure nothing gets better than that.
Hey, you ever wonder what happens within the Pokémon universe whenever a new type or feature is added? Apparently, mass panic. In typical bobandbill style, this fic answers the thing that every fic writer tries to tackle (reconciling canon updates and retcons) in the best way bobandbill can (via half-meta shenanigans).
Yeeeep, like I said under most unique, what's really pleasing about this fic is it tackles a subject no one else has thought to cover: how league stadiums work. But in doing so, it also covers Pokémon and how their various abilities might be used by humans, not to mention the entire Pokémon-human relationship in general. It certainly gives you a lot to think about for the next time you see a battling arena in the anime or enter one in the games.
Green is 100% all about Loretta, but from start to finish, she's perfectly executed as a character. Yeah, she might seem a little like a cartoonish mob doll, but that's kinda the point, especially when put in contrast to the Stepford-esque ladies of Viridian. And Eddie is so delightfully strong and silent that it only highlights the ending all the more.
I've tried to make it my policy to not nominate anyone who's already been nominated for variety's sake, but I just can't help myself with this one. This entire relationship gave Lona's storyline a much-needed happy ending, so I'm completely unashamed of saying I ship it.
I love it when you have a pair of characters who snark at each other, ngl. Jake and Jade have a trainer-Pokémon relationship, but honestly, it feels like a natural relationship between two friends who have known each other for so long that they tease each other like a married couple. It's like the kind of relationship where you tell your best friend EXACTLY what they look like when they're drunk, and it's absolutely enjoyable to watch. In part because one of the friends happens to be a telekinetic catdogfox … thing.
This relationship will probably not stop being a highlight to this fic for me anytime soon. It's very clear that they care about each other, sometimes even going to the point of wanting to die for one another. (And sometimes to the point of LITERALLY nearly dying for one another.) Yet at the same time, they have this kind of level of dysfunction about them, where you're not sure WHAT they are to each other—whether they hate each other, are growing estranged, like each other on a decidedly not brother-sister level, what-have-you. It's all kinds of messed up and complicated, and it makes them both more developed human beings.
Even its last chapter ended on a flipping cliffhanger involving mass destruction.
But if traditional trainer fics IS your cuppa, then Roots is a very enjoyable read. As a trainer fic, it does an incredible job at not only telling the story of two boys setting out on a life-changing journey but also the story of training itself. As in, Mrs. Lovett isn't afraid to talk about the red tape, the constant training, multiple gym battles, and all kinds of other things other trainer fics might gloss over for fear of getting too repetitive. Yet Roots finds ways of making each battle unique, of having each moment add to the overall story. And as for the characters and their journey, it's difficult to not want to root for Michael or to not see how he grows up. Roots is basically a coming-of-age story with Pokémon, and it's got a lot of spirit to boot.
I find the fact that Praxiteles obviously gives precisely zero [insert expletive here] about standard trainer fic procedures very refreshing. As in, The Progression reads a lot like a Hoenn playthrough at first glance, but it progressively gets more experimental and self-referential to the point where Prax straight-up quotes the script in a "preview of an upcoming chapter." No, I mean, Prax literally went, "I haven't finished this part of the fic yet, but here, have the in-game text." And it's done deliberately, not as a stroke of laziness. And besides that, it's not unusual to come across scenes that are deliberately told only through dialogue or only through fragmented images or as a one-sided conversation. Putting it another way, if trainer fics were art, you might encounter a lot of Norman Rockwells or Rembrandts. Maybe even a Picasso or Degas. The Progression? Is a Warhol. (Or maybe I'm overthinking it.)
Ghetsis arrives at Team Galactic HQ to help with their "energy issues." Shenanigans ensue.
You know how that one dude in Avatar who always yells "MY CABBAGES" is always 100% hilarious? The cast of this entire fic is a little like that guy, only instead of "MY CABBAGES," it's more like "MY CLEFAIRY" and "MY ROM HACK."
It's a PMD fic told in second person, and that's just about as amazing a concept as it sounds.
Admittedly, I'm in love with fics that break tradition, and A Vulpix Tail does a wonderful job of that by being literally a reverse PMD fic. Unlike most PMD fics, AVT takes a Pokémon from a world inhabited purely by them, changes her into a human, and throws her into a strange world where Pokémon happily coexist with mankind. In doing so, it also comments on how silly the PMD genre can get. As in, wandering around, amnesiac, and clearly claiming to be something else? In this fic, that means you're automatically assumed to be drunk. It's beautiful.
Set in a Unova devoid of people, Boundary tells the tale of a Gothorita who takes it upon himself to escort the ghost girl (think Strange House and Marvelous Bridge) on her journey to return the Lunar Wing. There's a sense of loneliness in its prose that highlights both the Gothorita's sense of duty to the girl and the journey their both on, and if there's any downside that I can think of, it's the fact that there's currently only one chapter.
Seconding Creepychu to add my own thoughts to the matter, but Indigo is a fairly … unique take on the standard "retelling of the game" kinds of fics. As in, for starters, literally the first thing you're told is that this entire story follows the journey of Red … and that it's riddled with conspiracies and you shouldn't trust anyone. But from there, each character is given their own unique twist, and Red himself offers up wonderful, wonderful commentary, which all adds up to the fact that this whole shebang is one long conga line of fascinating, occupied purely by the characters we all know, love, and are told we probably shouldn't trust with children.
To put it in short, Calem is the everyman. He's not a slacker, he's not lazy, he has no other reason for not going on a journey besides, you know, the fact that he doesn't want to go. But he's stuck in a situation where a mysterious force drives him forward, and he copes with that the best way he can: by snarking relentlessly about it. In other words, Calem himself forms a perfect commentary to the actual canon. While the events of X and Y try to force themselves on him, he pushes right on through, pointing out just how tiring or unusual this all could be if he was a willing participant in it. A refreshing change to the normal protagonist in a trainer fic.
Esaax is really someone you want to root for from page one of this fic. He's almost down-to-earth, matter-of-fact, maybe even a little too literal … and then the evolution happens. And then he gets REALLY interesting. Point is, Esaax is a character who spends most of the fic struggling with the things that happen to him, and it's because of him that this fic gets to be as interesting as it is.
She's got style. She's got grace. She can take out an entire group of Pokémon while maintaining her absolute adorableness. These things don't rhyme, and I don't care.
For a gym leader in a trainer fic, you get a surprising amount of detail out of Lona … and a beautiful amount of character development. You want to hate her at first, just like Michael wants to hate her, but as you learn more about her and how she views her position, you sympathize with her more and more until you just want her to be happy. Her entire arc is beautifully done and ends on a hopeful enough note that you just feel GOOD having met her.
Sure, jealous boyfriends aren't exactly anything new, but the way Raichu made his entrance, by barging in and possessively questioning anyone remotely interested in April, shows he knows how to make a lasting impression.
Yeah, I think we all knew the kings were going to pull something along the lines of what they did, but the build-up to the end was fantastically done. Like, "clearly evil but also operating on a different moral plane" evil. It's just that at the same time, they were terrifyingly powerful and godlike, and one has to wonder how Dorian and the crew plan on tackling them in Shatterpoint.
I might just be biased, but this has to be the most hilarious interpretation of a canon character I've seen outside of an actual comedy fic. Celio functions as a wonderful foil to the straight-laced characters he interacts with. As in, he's crass, snarky, and perfectly willing to blackmail Bill for hacking into his account. But mostly, he's crass and snarky, and it's wonderful.
The doors pulled apart with a loud whine. Inside, the hall opened up into a massive warehouse, filled with rows and rows of perfect conical steel devices Ghetsis stared oddly at. One at the far end had several grunts in HAZMAT suits inspecting an open panel on the cone."I'm unfamiliar with these devices. What are they?" asked Ghetsis."The complete collection of live Galactic Bombs, assembled and armed."Ghetsis gave Saturn a complicated look, rubbing his forehead. "This wasn't the energy proposal I was invited to hear. I don't associate 'bomb' with electrical power."
“Again, I don’t have a clue. We’ve been given a name for this typing by the League, but-” The nurse was interrupted by the door slamming open with a loud bang, accompanied by a pink-haired girl who charged in bawling her eyes out.“She’s been changed!” she yelled, waving a Clefairy at the nurse. Sam took a step away from her and looked at Brooke and Elliot with a raised eyebrow.“That’s Whitney. She’s the Gym Leader of Goldenrod,” Brooke said. “She gets… emotional.”“It’s different now! It’s a Fairy type, I know it!” Whitney was now jumping frantically. The Pokémon Centre door shook with each stomp she made, until a Chansey waddled up and stabbed her with a large tranquiliser. She slumped to the floor, while the Clefairy happily waved at the Chansey. The Chansey ignored it and looked at the nurse, as if to ask if she should inject the Clefairy as well.“Right, let’s take a look at you then,” the nurse said, scooping up the small Pokémon. Sam stared at the unconscious gym leader.“Oh, she’s very energetic sometimes.” She took the tranquiliser away from the Chansey and petted it on the head. “Too energetic. That’s why we have…” she trailed off as Whitney rose to her feet and stretched out her arms. Sam took a few more slow steps towards the door.“But that should have been enough to knock out a Donphan,” the nurse whispered.“I’m much too upset about this for that!” Whitney said, stomping a foot. “Something went and changed my Clefairy! It’s a Fairy type!” She began to sob again, but a bit less violently this time, an indication that the tranquiliser was having at least some effect.
“Honey,” she said tiredly, knocking on the tin door. “Baby, I did somethin’ real bad.” She heard nothing, but that was no surprise, so she continued. “I thought comin’ here would be good for us, y’know? Like, I thought gettin’ away from the city would make us better people. But I just feel worse. And meaner. And madder.” She sunk to the ground, getting dirt on the green dress she hated. Dotty sat next to her. “I put the ladies to sleep, like I used to do at restaurants. Remember?” She smiled softly and absently rubbed Dotty’s slick leaves with her fingers. “But I didn’t even get nothin’ out of it. I gave all the money to charity,” she said, throwing her hands into the air. “And I don’t even feel good about it.”She sat quietly for a second, before finally climbing back to her feet. “I’m gonna go make dinner,” she said faintly, after a long sigh. “Sandwiches okay?” Right before she left, the door cracked open, and Eddie peeked out at her from the pitch-black room. She started to ask him if he had heard her, but he grabbed her wrist and pulled her inside, shutting the door quickly behind her. They were in a tiny curtained area, and once the door was shut and darkness returned, Eddie parted the thick cloth. Loretta gasped.Bathed in dim red light, four shallow basins filled with different liquids sat on a table. Hanging everywhere on strings attached at various points on the walls were fully developed photographs. Loretta walked slowly, careful not to touch anything, and got closer to one of the photos. She saw that it – and all of the pictures – were from their photoshoot in the Viridian Forest. Her lip quivered, and she felt like her face projected more red than the light bulb.“Oh, Eddie,” she whispered, placing her hand on her chest. With her other hand, she gently took hold of the photograph, examining it closer. “These are… wait.” She furrowed her brow and plucked the picture out of the clothespin’s grasp. She then quickly shuffled through the curtain and out the door, Eddie close behind. In full daylight, she saw all the details.“I look awful!” she shouted, letting her arms fall limply at her side at she stared blankly forward. “I look freakin’ terrible,” she mumbled, biting her lip. She turned around and faced Eddie, her mouth still slightly open. Eddie was slowly approaching her. Before he could wrap her in his arms, however, he giggled. “You’re… laughing?” Loretta asked, eyes widening. “You think this is funny?” He was laughing even harder now, and his whole body was shaking. “You’re just as mean as those ladies!” she yelled, beginning to smile herself. “The whole reason we moved here,” she said, her nostrils widening as a full-blown grin took over face, “was because I thought green was my color! And look at this!” She waved the photo in his face and grabbed his arm for support as both of them panted for air. “I look like a Nidoking!” They screamed and collapsed into the grass, holding each other tightly. Loretta buried her face into Eddie’s chest to contain her shrieks of laughter. After several minutes, they both lay down, holding their stomachs.“I’m sorry, honey,” she mumbled, patting the ground until she found his hand. “I can’t believe I thought this would be a good idea. I just don’t know anymore, y’know? I don’t think havin’ kids is worth livin’ like this..” She scooted closer to him. “I’m startin’ to wonder if bein’ shot in the head in my thirties would be better than dyin’ from boredom when I’m eighty.” He laughed lazily in return, and she rolled over, pushing herself up so she could look him in the eyes. “Wha’d’ya say, babe? Let’s ditch this place and go back home. We can crash our car runnin’ from the cops. Get in a shootout with a gang. Or we can just keep just keep livin’ forever, you, me, and Dotty, robbin’ banks every day.” As if on cue, the Oddish scampered over. Loretta grinned at her and looked back at her husband with pleading eyes. “It’s your choice. We can even… we can even stay here if you want.”Eddie looked sternly back at her with a cocked eyebrow. He had spent their entire time in Viridian reading, making friends at work, and relaxing. For the first time in his life, he felt like he had stability. He didn’t have to worry about prison or gun wounds or dying. He was safer than he had ever been. Leaning up, he came face to face with Loretta, who was staring at him nervously. Never smiling, he took a deep breath.“Let’s get the hell outta here.”
The ending of that fic I keep going on about. What's significant about this is that Loretta spends the entirety of the fic trying her best to fit in, and it's here when she realizes the suburban life just isn't for her. And it's here, too, that her husband, the strong and silent Eddie, does the one thing he can to comfort her. For a pair of crooks, this is absolutely adorable.
Perfect, I thought, as I wrapped my arms around hers. As I made a knot out of my arms, I could see her brown eyes staring at me, with a mix of wonder and confusion. I could see her hair being blown by the soft wind, with strands both enveloping her bow and resting on her forehead. I could see her mouth slightly quivering at the motions of my arms, perhaps out of feeling tickled.I had dozed off for a while before I realized that I had a firm grip on her. I turned my back towards her, and I could hear her soft gasp. Taking deep breaths, I readied myself to carry her.One, two, thr—Everything suddenly became a blur. The grass dissolved into streaks of green, and the sky became blotches of white and blue. The building was no more than a splash of gray, and the sun was nothing beyond a few dots of yellow. But what filled my vision was pink. Everything screamed pink, and it felt like pink was embracing every part of my body. I couldn’t see anything but a world of pink, and even when I closed my eyes, my vision was filled by pink.And then, a halt. And laughter.“Weeeee! That was fun!” I heard the little girl say in between breaths. “You’re so cute!”I looked at her, and her appearance had changed. Her hair was now very messy, with blades of grass and chunks of dirt in between her hair. Her forehead had beads of sweat that ran down her cheeks, which had lost some of its rosiness. Her pink clothes were now far from the neat ensemble she wore mere minutes ago.But her eyes still had the same twinkle, and her lips still donned the same smile.“I want to keep you! Can I keep you, Drifloon?”I stared at her blankly, for I didn’t know what to respond. Keep me, like a Pokemon owned by a trainer? I have certainly thought about that possibility more than once, and this wasn’t the first time that a trainer tried to catch me. But as I looked at her and her delicate form, her earnest smile, her pink self, I knew that this was the first time that the feeling was mutual.She wanted to keep me. I wanted to be kept.I gave her a smile, which translated to a bigger one in her own face. She immediately ran towards the building, screaming “Daddy! Daddy!” I stayed there, excited at the prospect of being owned by someone I knew I would enjoy spending time with, even if I had only met her that day.The next time I saw her, it was already sunset, and her smile was replaced by a frown.She approached me rather slowly, almost as if it was the first time she met me. Her back was slouched, as if she didn’t want to look at me. I could sense that something was bothering her, and that she was about to tell me what it was.“Daddy says I’m too young to own a Pokemon,” she said slowly. I didn’t know what to do. I wanted to take her with me, but I knew she wouldn’t be happy about that. And I wanted her to be happy.“But he did tell me that the wind pattern means that you’ll come again next week,” she said, a hint of positivity showing in her face. “Promise that we’ll play together again next Friday, okay?”I gave her a smile. She gave me a bigger smile in reply.“All right, I have to go back inside to help Daddy,” she said as she gave me a tight hug. I watched her pink self walk towards the building, occasionally looking at me to check if I was still there. When she reached her door, she looked at me and gave me a wave, and I waved back.Maybe next Friday, I thought.
A Drifloon tries to steal a child. Ends up doing this instead. Cuteness ensues.
She sent her other hand up to touch the kwazai’s face, caressing it with fingers that shook in spite of her efforts to prevent such. His skin was rubbery and quite smooth. She found it pleasant to the touch, and she tried to focus on how nice it felt rather than on the fear that was steadily overtaking her. It began to work, too. But then Esaax’s head suddenly moved with surprising speed, the jaws snapping harshly. His serrated teeth sank deeply into the meager flesh of her arm.Madeline screamed in pain. All the love that she’d had for Esaax was gone from her mind now, replaced by pure, primal terror. Knowing that she currently had access to no attacks that could do him any harm and aware that she would likely just get them thrown right back at her at twice the power if she did have any, she tried desperately to free herself from him, but to no avail. Her escape was foiled soundly, not only by Esaax’s sheer physical strength but also by the dark gray aura that flared into being around both pokémon at her attempt to escape, signaling that Esaax had retained his shadow tag ability.Esaax worried Madeline’s arm in his jaws with shredding teeth and sharp, jerking movements of his neck until the appendage was torn away at the elbow, gruesomely freeing one side of her, drawing more cries of agony. His left hand clutched her right hand even more tightly, and there were several sickening cracks as the bones in his grip yielded to the pressure. His other hand shot forward and slammed into her chest, pinning her to the wall.Now struggling to breathe, Madeline stared through eyes blurred with tears at the empty space where half of her arm had once been. Then, fearfully, she looked up at Esaax once more. His head was already raised for another strike. Her blood dripped slowly and thickly from his jaws, and she glimpsed a couple of her own fingers protruding from between his teeth before they, along with the rest of her severed limb, disappeared into his mouth and down his very long throat.It was in that moment that Esaax became aware of something new. He had discovered the presence of a power within him into which he had not yet tapped. He summoned it forth, and it rose up through his spine, radiated out through one arm, and gathered in his hand.Esaax went ahead and released Madeline, letting her slump to the floor in her wavering consciousness, knowing that she couldn’t escape anyway. He gazed at his hand with curiosity. Energy in a shade of black that he’d never seen before danced in a slow vortex around it with a glow that was intensifying by the second.He drew that arm back as if he were working an invisible bow. All of his senses focused fully on the bleeding, shaking mr. mime before him. His concentration became heightened to its maximum acuteness. At this range, it was virtually unnecessary to take aim, but he nonetheless sought out the most lethal trajectory for his new weapon.His arm thrust forward. With a loud, hollow sound, a glowing black beam of incredible intensity exploded from his hand, blasting Madeline point-blank.At the exact moment that the beam struck Madeline, a horrible, sudden pain hit Esaax like a wrecking ball, taking his breath away. Red light exploded in his vision. His nerves seared excruciatingly for what felt like innumerable seconds, and his head felt as though it were blowing itself apart.In his suffering, Esaax staggered and fell to the floor. When he rose once more, his mind surfaced from the altered state that it had been in for nearly the entire duration of the time since he’d evolved.His vision returned in the next moment. He saw blood before him, as well as something black and twisted—a corpse. Something—someone—who, mere moments ago, had been alive—until he had killed her.Esaax recoiled with a scream, suddenly frantic to be as far away from the scene as possible. His stomach violently expelled its contents. His renewed clarity wouldn’t let him delude himself into believing that this was a nightmare or a hallucination. The scene before his eyes unflinchingly spoke the truth: he had murdered this pokémon. He had tasted her blood. He had eaten her flesh…A howl of anguish and horror tore its way out through his throat. With fear, confusion, and disgust like none that he had ever known, all directed straight toward himself, Esaax brought his newfound technique to bear on the wall, letting it linger there until a large area of the wall had turned black and disintegrated, and then fled into the night.
Vicious, gruesome, and that moment when you're left to wonder whether or not Esaax is COMPLETELY gone. Up until this point, we've been given a pretty calculating version of Esaax, but here, he's feral. Feral and violent but also confused. In other words, this scene is full of gore, yeah, but it's such MEANINGFUL gore. And as a standalone murder, it's also well-written and delightfully violent.
This was starting to happen with more and more regularity. In the beginning, the tentacles were stupid. They would literally just float right into Dorian’s shots without trying to get out of the way at all. It had been easy to pick them off, as they would usually spawn a few miles away in the sky and take their time getting to him. Over the last couple months however, they had wised up to Dorian’s weapons and gotten out of the way when he tried to take them out at a distance. Which didn’t make sense to him seeing as they had no visible way to see, but it was happening so he dealt with it. As the tentacles drew closer they formed themselves into a fifty foot tall heart. Dorian laughed aloud as he plugged in his headphones and began searching for a song. They had tried to communicate with him over the course of their last few attempts, at first forming rudimentary shapes like squares and triangles. The heart was something new however and Dorian sarcastically saluted their attempt to soften his resolve.“Nice try you fucks!” Dorian yelled, ending the words with a smile.In response the tentacles straightened themselves into rigid spears and doubled their speed towards him. Dorian found the song he was looking for and pressed play. He deposited the mp3 player into his pocket and reached down to touch his toes. As the tentacles closed to within a hundred yards away he drew his sword with his left hand and his sidearm with his right. Five Finger Death Punch screamed in his ears as he sprinted forward.“AND THAT’S WHY THEY CALL ME, BAD COMPANY!”Dorian dove to the ground and rolled as the first pair of tendrils swiped down at him. He came up with a horizontal slash that sank deep into the flesh of one that was too slow to swing away. It exploded into purple light just as another three shot towards him from the left, right and middle. Instead of trying to clip them with his sword, Dorian fell backwards, allowing them to collide with each other.“I CAN’T DENY! BAAAADDD, BAD COMPANY TILL THE DAY I DIE!”Dorian raised his pistol and tagged another two before the third swung away. As they exploded into flares of energy he saw a single tentacle racing towards him from the corner of his eye. He rolled left as it dissolved the patch of ground he had just been occupying. As it streaked towards him he swung his sword in a wide arc and destroyed it with a glancing blow to its pointed tip. Only three remained and they shrank back to regroup and assess. They twitched and swung back and forth, as if trying rudimentary sign language.“UNTIL THE DAY I DIE! UNTIL THE DAY I DIE!”“Come on!” Dorian roared.The tentacles shot forward again to impale him, spaced only inches from each other. Dorian ran forward and jumped upwards to meet them. He raised his right hand and fired towards the center of them. As he expected he missed and they spread apart to hit him from three sides, which is exactly what he wanted. He twisted his body to the right and managed to slash all three of them as his left arm came around. Dorian landed on his knees next to his beer. He opened one and drank it warm as the violet light faded from the sky.Satisfied, Dorian shouldered his pack and his beer. He clicked his heels together as he resumed his trek back towards the house.
Weird alien hell tentacles? Dorian shooting literally everything that moves? Good to see Shatterpoint promises to be just as violent as its predecessor.
Dorian was already out of breath by the time they had ascended the first set of stairs. They had found that the floor of the room they needed to cross was hostile to their intent. He had taken a step forward into the room to have the floor crumble beneath them. So they had adopted a habit of Alakazam levitating them over every room they needed to cross on their way to the top.Shelton had not let go of his hand since they had ascended the first set of stairs. For the first couple floors he had wanted to break away from her, and he didn’t know why. Some kind of space had opened up between them when she told him about Ethan’s involvement with their parents’ death. It was a space that had no shape or quantification. It was just there but he held on to her hand because it seemed to give her comfort.They rose through the levels of the towers to eventually arrive at an archway filled with sunlight. The cascaded through and into the open air. Alakazam screamed with his mind and his voice.A bewildering sight greeted Dorian. Six vaguely humanoid forms were holding Ethan’s head above his body. A small part of him exclaimed with happiness before the larger part cast it aside as he watched what happened next. The six shapes of glowing green dissolved into the air, swirling around Ethan’s levitating head. All at once, the pieces burrowed into Ethan’s exposed neck. A flash of green light issued from Ethan’s body as the last of the flakes disappeared from view.Alakazam bellowed again as Ethan’s head drifted down to attach itself to his body. Black smoke issued from his neck as the flesh melded itself back together. Ethan shot to his knees, arms held forward. He breathed in, then out, in then out. When he breathed out on the third breath, he exhaled his teeth. They tinkled to the ground, their whiteness a stark contrast to the black of the tower. “Dorian,” Shelton whispered.He was about to say something, anything, when Alakazam interrupted by launching a swirling ball of energy at Ethan. The attack connected with his chest and ricocheted into the sky and exploded. Again Alakazam launched an attack but it bounced off Ethan’s body. Ethan looked up at them, his pupils dilated to the edge of his eyes.Dorian shifted his stance as Ethan rose to his feet and floated into the air. His arms were stretched wide as he floated upwards. He looked down to them, a cruel grin etched across his face.“Ethan?” Alakazam broadcasted. “Our name is all,” Ethan responded, his voice a mix of overlapping voices.Ethan’s skin darkened to black. His torso elongated and his arms instantly tripled in length. His clothes fell away as his body expanded and lengthened, becoming more serpentine. His legs melded together as his head morphed into a more triangular shape. Four fleshy crests broke his skin from behind his neck; two smaller below and two longer above. Interlocking rings of gold traced the length of his snake-like torso as a forked tail took shape at the end of his body. Bigger and bigger he grew as three claws sprouted from each hand and two fangs became visible in his mouth.Dorian was never a model student. However, he had always been entranced by Pokemon mythology and had no trouble recognizing the creature in front of them. Rayquaza. Lord of the air and all below it. They all took an involuntarily step backwards, except for Alakazam. The legendary Pokemon snaked its reptilian head forward and grasped the plate in its mouth. Raising its head, the Rayquaza swallowed it whole. The air dragon spun in a quick circle, clawed hands grasping the empty air. Its gaze fell to them. It roared so loudly that Dorian felt like the entire world was breaking apart. The Rayquaza lifted its head; a ball of pulsing white light filling its mouth. Dorian saw Alakazam raise his arms.The sky dragon’s head jutted forward and released a discharge of energy that Dorian knew would kill them all. The blast of energy halted though, right before it reached them as Alakazam erected a gargantuan pane of energy to halt its movement. He saw the psychic’s body shake and glow as he struggled to hold the attack in place. The shield began to fracture. Wide cracks of white light expanded through its expanse as Alakazam’s hands waved from side to side.Alakazam turned his head and looked backwards. He glanced at all of them but his gaze focused on Dorian. He breathed in and stared back as Alakazam closed his eyes. The shield of energy shattered and Rayquaza’s attack struck the top of the tower. Dorian saw Alakazam’s body break apart in a scattering of light as the energy detonated. The shockwave blew all three of them off the tower. A pressure gripped Dorian’s chest as he fell. He focused his eyes down to see a spear of the tower embedded in his chest. Blood trickled into the air as he lightly gripped the shaft of stone. With each beat of his heart, the world around him became sprinkled with blackness. He turned his head to look for his sister but all he saw was the sky.Another explosion turned his body around to face the water. It greeted him with an azure smile, waves slow and hypnotic. Dorian blinked, more darkness clouding his vision. As shock ravaged his body he saw two shapes streaking towards him from the West. One was pink and one was purple, and they both glowed like heaven itself.Dorian’s heart thumped loudly one final time then stopped completely. The water below reached out to him, and up above, he heard the air dragon roar.
Folks, that is the final scene of Requiem. In its entirety. Not sure what else I can say because who else would have the balls to end an entire fic on a note wherein this happens? Needless to say, massive spoilers ensue here?
Heeeeeyyyyy, you're technically an established writer, right? In any case, aww yiss, Sike Saner. Being after my own heart, this is. Crafter of delightful characters; weaver of epic, Pokémon-centered plots; possible defiler of Wobbuffet. On a serious note, though, with the (re)publication of both Communication and Origin of Storms, Sike gave us plenty of well-constructed plots and beautifully developed characters to chew on. Her return to the forums is absolutely welcomed, and I for one look forward to seeing more of her work.
While others may try what Cutlerine does and just comes out pretentious, Cutlerine manages to be a storyteller. And I know that sounds like a backhanded compliment, but what I mean is that Cutlerine's prose is very image-heavy and very intelligent but not in ways that make it clear she's trying to sound philosophical or intellectual. It just actually is philosophical and intellectual, and as such, it doesn't talk down to its readers but rather assumes they're on the same plane. What comes out of that is a heady style that adds to her already imaginative, complex plots full of fascinating, well-rounded characters. And possibly Lovecraftian hellbeasts.
Seconding Cutlerine, only this time, it's to add that Phalanx has a knack for coming up with interesting concepts. His fic, Convergence, offered to bring something new and different to the PMD genre with his main character with a discernible, relevant backstory, and for a first fic, Convergence has so far been a pretty satisfying read. Phalanx has really only one place to go from here, and because he's started out so well, he's definitely worth keeping an eye on.
Can we talk about how Cutlerine publishes a full-scale epic every year? Or that she has successfully updated her interactive fic on time every week since late 2013? GDI, Cutlerine.
Y'know, maybe it's not my place to say this, but I know TGB tends to go through a lot. So to see a new update to his fic … it's really watching him push through a lot of odds to do it. And hey, even if that's TOO personal and even if y'all DO need something a bit more substantiative than that, at least let it be known that he's so hardcore dedicated to his fic that he's picked out an anime cast for it.
One of the things I find the most handy about Creepychu's reviews is that he discusses things. It's not a simple matter of quote something, say a bit about it, and keep moving on. He definitely analyzes things and talks about what they mean and what the significance of those things is. As such, he leaves you with this impression that not only did he make an effort to understand your story, but also, he did his best to construct advice relevant to you.
Hakajin is definitely one of the names I've seen the most frequently around the forum, and what dp says is true: not only does Hakajin keep up with all the stories she decides to read, but she goes out of her way to leave nothing but helpful reviews wherever she goes.